OLSReg (9:37 pm 29-07-1111)
OLSReg Q: After finished practice, the team invited Norwegian pals to join the bamboo dance, a traditional dance of the ethnic Vietnamese. Following the dance, we asked for an unoccupied room to rehearse some entertaining show items which would be performed in the coming time. Nhờ các bạn check xem có lỗi sai gì không? Tks in advance.
Vaorung : 1. After finishing
Vaorung : 2. Lỗi the và a nhé: to join '''the''' bamboo dance, '''a''' traditional dance of the ethnic Vietnamese
Cuucuu : finish'''ing''' hoặc having finished practice .. to rehearse some tiết mục (that were) to be performed the next time. Kẹt tiết mục
Vaorung : which would be performed next là đc
USD : shows
Cuucuu : Ngắn vậy không nên xài mệnh đề đâu, làm câu yếu, xài infinitive hay participial phrase, anh thấy hay hơn
Pinnacle : tiết mục: performance, ex: 1 tiết mục khác trong đêm trung thu -> Another performance in the mid - autumn festival celebration
OLSReg : Mình dùng finished ở đây as an adj. Is it okey? Just like are you finished or so
Cuucuu : Chẳng nên xài thế, dễ confused. At the end of its practice
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